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Title: The Perfect Wife (part 12 of 12, COMPLETE, ~8000 words)
Pairing: H/D
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Bottom!Draco. Slash. Pseudo-heterosexuality. Mindfuck. Consent of the most dubious sort, edging into non-con, or possibly doing a cannonball straight into the middle of that particular dark pool. Identity confusion of all sorts. Boys with breasts (1); boys who like boys with breasts (1). Did I mention breasts? Don't let them scare you. Daddy kink. OOC-ness and deliberately fluffy cutesy feminine name changes. Some sadistic tendencies. Object insertion - cos I like plugs, seemingly. Comeplay, I think, or something very like it. Anorexia and forced feeding, or close enough as makes no nevermind. Forced feminization, for sure. Intimations of mpreg and forced breeding. Excessive use of endearments. Wait, where are you going...?

Summary: He can't remember what he was like before he lost his memory, but the person in the mirror doesn't really feel like him.

Author's Note: I've wised up, a little: I finally learned to complete a thing before I post it. Many, many thanks to [livejournal.com profile] paean_sf for beta-reading, ego-stroking, holding my hand, and suffering through about a zillion mood swings draft changes over the course of four days. (And then some!)

I added a lil moar sexytiems. And now we're done. :)

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The irritating voice has finally taken itself off. Draco is left to drift in his pleasant haze, the dream already slipping from his mind. There are no pointed sticks. No confusing conversations. Just Harry's hands, plucking and kneading and stroking, and the high, breathy sounds that Draco's making in response.

"Such a sweet babygirl," Harry sighs. He shifts under Draco, his hard, denim-trapped cock rubbing against Draco's plugged arse.

"Are you awake, love?"

Draco tries to nod. His head lolls against Harry's chest, heavy and useless; his thoughts are treacle-thick. When he tries to open his eyes, his eyelids are heavy as lead, and it's more than he can manage to lift them.

"Daddy wants to fuck you just like this, babygirl. All soft and relaxed and helpless."

"Nngh," Draco says in agreement.

Harry slips his right hand beneath the damp and scratchy lace of Draco's knickers, stretching them until the lace gives way with a soft rip. His fingers curl loosely around the shaft of Draco's cock, while his thumb presses into the slit; he spreads Draco's pre-come all around the head with the pad of his thumb.

Draco rocks his hips, squirming in Harry's lap, trying to coordinate his limbs well enough to push up into Harry's hand.

"Your knickers are so wet for me already," Harry says with a chuckle. "Just from playing with your tits. I bet I could get you to come just from that if I wanted to. Couldn't I, pretty."

Draco can only moan in reply. His toes curl inside his too-tight shoes; the sharp, spiky heels gouge into the sides of the armchair.

"And you didn't even want them," Harry murmurs. "But it's like I always tell you, sweetheart: Daddy really does know best." He laughs softly. "Maybe this time you'll remember that, yeah?"

He gives Draco's cock one slow, languid pull, chuckling as Draco whines and pants and tries to follow Harry's hand with his hips.

"Shh, baby," Harry whispers, withdrawing his hand from Draco's knickers. "It's Daddy's turn now."

Draco's world abruptly tilts on his axis. He's lifted up, his head flopping back over the flexing muscles in Harry's arm; then he's flying, falling, coming to rest in Harry's chair, curling into the warmth that still lingers in the fabric.

His knickers are yanked abruptly downwards, and he cries out as the rough lace catches on his cock. The knickers are shoved down past his knees, tangling around his ankles - and then they're gone, much to his relief. Harry drags Draco's arse to the edge of the chair, and his shoulders force Draco's knees to spread wide. Draco gasps as Harry's fingers delve into the cleft of his arse, grasping the base of the plug and slowly, oh so slowly dragging the hard length free.

The plug drops to the carpet with a thud, and Harry stills.

Draco keens at the hollow, aching emptiness between his legs. He can feel his hole gaping wide. Warm, wet liquid trickles into his crack - Harry's come, seeping slickly out of him.

"D-daddy," he says thickly, forcing his wayward tongue to bend around the syllables. "Daddy. P-please."

He needs, sweet Circe, he needs Harry's cock so much he can't bear it, and he can't make his mouth fit around the words to beg for what he needs.

"Daddy," he moans. He opens his eyes, tries to lift his head to look down, but all he can see is a dazzle of light and color. Harry's little more than a dark, dark shadow between his legs.

"Such a pretty pink cunt," Harry whispers. He slides a fingertip around the swollen, sensitive rim of Draco's hole, drawing a hoarse cry from Draco's throat. "Just look at you, baby." Harry traces his fingertip through the thick dribble of his come dripping out of Draco's arse. "Look how wet your pussy is for me."

"Daddy, please," Draco whispers.

"My little slut," Harry says fondly as he shoves three fingers into Draco's hole. "You're already so hot and loose, ready for Daddy's cock to fill you up."

"Pleaseā€¦" Draco tries to push back against the fingers fucking his arse. They're making such filthy wet sounds, and Draco can feel his skin turning red with his humiliation, but the need overwhelms all else. He'll go mad if he doesn't have Harry's cock soon. He needs it. Needs Harry's cock, needs Harry's come to fill him up.

Harry scoots Draco back, spreading his legs wide to hook them over the arms of the chair.

"You told me once," Harry says breathlessly as he lifts Draco up, "that I couldn't have everything I wanted. That I couldn't have you."

Draco's back is braced against the chair, his head hanging back over the edge. The chair teeters, wobbling backwards, until Harry kneels on the edge of the seat. He positions his cock, lets Draco slide down, Harry's cock slipping slick and easy into Draco's well-stretched hole. Harry grunts and holds him still for a moment, nuzzling at his hair.

Draco sags in Harry's hold, limp as a ragdoll.

"Well, I've got you," Harry whispers. "And I've got it all. Almost everything I ever wanted, baby."

"Please," Draco whispers. He wriggles feebly, but he's pinned in place, by Harry's hands and his own heavy limbs. "Please," he says with a whimper.

"The perfect slut," Harry murmurs, as he begins to move. "The perfect wife," he gasps. "And soon we'll be a perfect family."

Draco wails as Harry's cock drags repeatedly over his prostate, hitting the little bundle of nerves with every other thrust. His back is rubbing raw against the chair but he can barely feel it, focused as he is on the pleasure, on the feel of Harry's cock driving into him. His own cock leaks untouched against his belly, his balls drawn up high and tight. He doesn't need any more than this. He could come like this. If only Harry would say the words.

"I can't believe how responsive you've been," Harry says. "How easy. I never knew that you could be so--"

He breaks off, leaning back to slide a hand between their bellies. His fingers close around Draco's cock, squeezing tight.

"Come for me, baby," Harry whispers.

"Daddy!" Draco screams, his back arching, his heels kicking as his cock spurts, his hot come spilling over Harry's clenched fist.

"Perfect," Harry whispers.

Date: 2011-12-28 06:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vampira6.livejournal.com
Bonus sexy times! Always good. And these were quite hot sexy times as well. Anyway, I think I interpreted things right - or wrong, but at least I interpreted (sorry if my grammar is off - I'm a half asleep zombie, and these words are starting to sound straaange) things :) Kind of curious now if it was intended that way...Hm. Sorry for lack of enthusiasm right now, like I said, I'm a zombie, but I really did love the story as a whole. And I'm gonna keep sending you those nude pictures till you cheer up. Hmhm.

Date: 2011-12-28 06:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vampira6.livejournal.com
Of Andrej, not me *headdesk* I think I should shut up now.

Date: 2011-12-28 03:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] all-not-well.livejournal.com
Awwww, way to get my hopes up on the nude pics. :P j/k! I'll take all the naked Andrej you care to send. I haven't found any new pics of him lately, and I need a fix, lol.

I'm glad you liked the sexytiems. :D There was originally just a hint of sex, but everyone was anticipating more, so I made the hint into an actual scene. I did start out with a bang, and kinda got people's expectations up - so I figured I needed to correct that mistake on my part. So it was just as well I posted in increments, instead of all in one go. :)

It was intended for you to do a lot of interpreting and reading between the lines on this. Harry took who he wanted and made him into what he wanted, and I could have written that story and had it all laid out for you... But I thought the more interesting point of view was Draco's, with his confused, Confunded, drugged perspective trying to sort it all out, and gradually sinking into the mire of Harry's madness.

(Harry Potter can't be gay, he wants the perfect wife and kids he's always dreamed about. And he can't be in love with Draco Malfoy, Draco hates his guts. So...okay...he'll just have to make it work. Right? RIGHT.)

Date: 2011-12-28 06:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vampira6.livejournal.com
Haha, unfortunately I don't have any nude pictures of him, sorry :( And I doubt I have any pictures of him that you haven't seen him already...I think you've got half his portfolio uploaded as icons as it is :P

Anyway, it makes sense. Only this last part made me think that Draco had rejected Harry in the past. Oh well...(Yes, I'm just home from work and tired AGAIN - sorry, I can never seem to comment on this fic with a clear mind, lol). I wonder if Harry will manage to keep Draco with him. Probably, since it's probably more a silent kind of madness anyway (he probably still acts normal and friendly enough to everyone else) and if he's managed to mess with people's minds so that they don't know what he's doing...Yeah, I'm thinking too much. Then again, what's with this tag 'the perfect 'verse'? That kind of makes you think there's going to be more. Probably not. Which is okay. But it suggests there is. Okay, I realize I sound like a confused lunatic. I shall stop talking. *wanders away looking for nargles*
Edited Date: 2011-12-28 06:35 pm (UTC)

Date: 2011-12-28 06:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] all-not-well.livejournal.com
I can never seem to comment on this fic with a clear mind - that is so perfect for this fic, lol. :)

I always tag my fics by fic and by 'verse. Just in case I ever manage to write all those sequels I keep meaning to write. :\

Date: 2011-12-28 07:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vampira6.livejournal.com
Haha, dammit. Oh well. It's been a pleasure stalking you, and I hope to see another story soon.

Date: 2011-12-28 10:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] carolinelamb.livejournal.com
Ah! Andrej Pejic! Makes a lot of sense!

I love Bottom!Draco like so many HP fangirls ;) He is just so pretty! And even more I like this dark, cheerfully mad Harry who just takes what he wants.

Date: 2011-12-28 03:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] all-not-well.livejournal.com
I ♥ Andrej! He is my Draco-muse. Soooooo pretty.

I'm glad you liked this! :D
Edited Date: 2011-12-28 03:52 pm (UTC)

Date: 2011-12-28 11:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] paean-sf.livejournal.com
I love the additional section. Its like knowing what you are getting for your birthday, then waking up and finding a big, unexpected package sitting there.

Sleepy Draco is just yummy. And the gentler exposition here works perfectly.

Date: 2011-12-28 03:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] all-not-well.livejournal.com
Yay! I wanted to give you a little surprise. :D Well, I'd told you I was expanding it, but, you know. :)

Thank you soooo much for everything. ♥♥♥ This is, IMO, the best fic I've written to date - and it would never have been what it is without your help.

Date: 2011-12-29 12:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] paean-sf.livejournal.com
You know, all I really did was tell you how good I thought the story was already, and then try to distract you with all the other stuff I want you to write to read. You give me way to much credit.

Date: 2011-12-29 12:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] all-not-well.livejournal.com
Pffffft. I've got like 50 e-mails that prove otherwise. ;)

Date: 2011-12-28 05:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gypsyflame.livejournal.com
Disturbing! This is sexy yet also creepy at the same time. It was so much fun to read.

I hope you're planning on writing more of this 'verse? I still have so many questions, LOL! And, um, I wouldn't be adverse to reading more sex scenes like this one. ;-)

Great job!

Date: 2011-12-28 06:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] all-not-well.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! I'm so glad. And that's exactly what I was aiming for - disturbingly sexy-creepy. And mysterious! ;)

I don't know what else will come up for this 'verse. But if there's another story there, I'll definitely write it.

Date: 2011-12-29 04:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] itsjustgwen.livejournal.com
Wow. This hit kinks I didn't even know I had. Disturbingly hot fic.

Date: 2011-12-29 04:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] all-not-well.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! I'm so pleased. :D

Date: 2011-12-31 02:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] duchessofdublin.livejournal.com
This is simple heart-breaking and amazing. Leaves so much to my imagination yet you filled all the blanks in a way. Amazingly written even if Harry was scary at times but hey--it's how he had to be written. Fantasic! :] x

Date: 2011-12-31 02:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] all-not-well.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! Leaves so much to my imagination yet you filled all the blanks in a way - that's precisely what I was aiming for, and I'm so pleased to hear you say that, as it makes me feel that I wasn't too badly off the mark. :) I'm so glad you enjoyed this. Thank you. :) ♥

Date: 2012-01-08 05:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laurahhhhlooo.livejournal.com
Well fuck you for not making the poor boy get his memories back!

But really though, this was great and horrible and fantastic and perfect. I still think Harry's a cock for turning Draco into well, whatever he is, but at the same time I love Harry/Draco so much this was just fabulous. And Draco makes a brilliant wife and him being all confused was so sweet and Harry being controlling and dominant etc. was great and everything was happy and good in the land of fic.

(I'll go and ramble somewhere else now.)

Date: 2012-01-08 05:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] all-not-well.livejournal.com
Not happy and good at all...that was the point. :P

Date: 2012-01-08 05:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laurahhhhlooo.livejournal.com
In my mind, a fic like this equals happy and good. :')

Date: 2012-01-17 09:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sabethea.livejournal.com
*loves this fic*

[livejournal.com profile] paean_sf was slightly embarrassed to be reccing it after being its cheerleader but OH I AM GLAD SHE DID! Because she was right - she wasn't reccing it BECAUSE she was its cheerleader, but because it was fucking sexy/disturbing (hot/dirty/wrong :) )

And I don't do mpreg, or even hints of it, usually. Except when it's just there because that's what the story asks for, which this one does! Brilliant.

(I will stop gushing now. Yes. I will not continue to tell you how much I love dark!imperfect!Harry and angsty!confused!Draco and no happy ending. Oh. Oops.)

Date: 2012-01-17 10:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] all-not-well.livejournal.com
OMG thank you! Please feel free to keep gushing, I don't get that often so it's precious to me, and I adore you for it. I totally jumped for joy when I read your comment! ♥♥♥ :D I loved that you loved this fic, and I'm thrilled that the mpreg and the non-happy ending worked for you. OMG thank you so so much. :D :D :D

Date: 2012-01-26 10:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gidgetxzim.livejournal.com
You know, I've been all types of worried about what I should say prow to comment but for gods fucking sake I just had to finally write something. You hit every thing I've ever been into and then some. I almost ran away from this fic and all the warnings but then I said fuck it, I've read some crazy shit before, and soldiered on. I'm so glad I did. You are an amazing writer and I mean that with every ounce of my being. I'm never into questionable or even unhappy endings but you've caught me and now I'm hooked. I can't wait to get my hands on all your other works of brilliance.

Date: 2012-01-26 11:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] all-not-well.livejournal.com
Thank you! :D I'm so flattered! You just made my day, omg. ♥ Thank you so much!

Date: 2012-01-28 06:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gidgetxzim.livejournal.com
Oh your so very welcome!

Now I have to get back to commenting every other amazing thing you wrote.

Date: 2012-01-28 06:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] all-not-well.livejournal.com
Pfffft, I don't know about amazing...I'm still learning.

Date: 2012-02-06 03:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gidgetxzim.livejournal.com
pshht...
dont doubt yourself darling, i think your doing amazing.

Date: 2012-02-06 04:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] all-not-well.livejournal.com
Well, thank you. ♥ I'm sortof having trouble at the moment just putting two words together, much less 1000 for the fest fic I'm supposed to be writing...so the confidence-booster is much appreciated. :D

Date: 2012-02-06 03:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gidgetxzim.livejournal.com
Anything for you my dear.
:)

Date: 2012-01-31 04:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fancypantsdylan.livejournal.com
Just WOW, this really did hit all the right marks, love femine!Draco and slight sadistic!Harry, I want to say that the other male was Ron, but Ron was shit at potions, so I'm not sure who the other male is.

This was totally brilliant and I even enjoyed the creepiness of it too. It would be brilliant if you wrote more, perhaps somehow Draco gets his memories back, perhaps seeing Pansy or someone familiar and then all hell breaks loose. But whatever you do, this is going in my memories file.

Date: 2012-01-31 04:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] all-not-well.livejournal.com
Thanks so much! :D I'm so pleased that you liked it. ♥♥♥

I tried my hand at a sequel, but alas, it just didn't come together. :\

Date: 2012-02-26 07:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drkmgic.livejournal.com
i can't believe this is over!!. as much as loved this fic i just can't reconcile the fact that the that there are so many unknown facts that i don't know and it's driving me crazy(this is so badly worded bad english is my 3rd language so forgive me for causing u confusion). i also hated that draco will be trapped in that marriage forever and judging from what harry said, " 'You told me once,' Harry says breathlessly as he lifts Draco up, 'that I couldn't have everything I wanted. That I couldn't have you.'" it looks like it going to be a non consensual marriage too. and oh is that ron that's the doctor married to pansy of all ppl. It's a little hard to imagine since i always see himn ending w/ hermione, but it makes sense that he would end up w/ pansy if he want a dumb wife w/ a will the strength of a saggy noodle. Hermione would be too much for him. nway i wished there was more to this. hopefully turn this into a full fic perhaps. i'm goign to stalk ur journal now for more fics. The caliber of ur writing is extremely high. I wouldn't be surprised if u were a sock of one of my favourite author. (i think that's how the saying goes) nway cheers and thank for the fic.
"

Date: 2012-02-26 03:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] all-not-well.livejournal.com
Nope, no sock, not even a fuzzy wool one. :D But I am very flattered, thank you so much! I appreciate the compliments. ♥

It's not Ron, actually...though that's a very good guess! I haven't given away the answer as I am still tossing around the idea of a follow-up. I started one, but then got stuck, alas! But I may yet get unstuck, someday. Oh, and this part is a complete, full fic, if not a very long one. ;)

Thank you for commenting!

Date: 2012-03-22 09:45 pm (UTC)
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Wow, just wow.

I loved this. So twisted and hot and just perfectly disturbing. I just loved it so much I didn't want it to end, but it was just right like that because I don't even want to think about Draco getting his memories back. There's something very wrong about me maybe but I want this just the way it is.

I love your warnings, too. Oh, also... it's George, yeah? I mean, I think it's him.

I'm telling you, this is all kinds of incredible. I'm so happy I found it! Can't wait to read more.

Date: 2012-03-22 11:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] all-not-well.livejournal.com
YOU SO WIN!!! You get a prize. (http://all-not-well.livejournal.com/21368.html) :D ♥

And I'm glad you liked. :D

Date: 2012-03-23 01:18 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] capitu
!!!!!!!!!!!!!

:D

<3

Date: 2012-06-08 02:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] undinessong.livejournal.com
*Recovers from being goo* This is awesome! I hope Draco finally settles into his life!

Now please excuse me while I go take a cold shower! :D

Date: 2012-06-08 02:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] all-not-well.livejournal.com
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! :D

Date: 2012-06-17 12:50 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
I fuckin love you for this! Thank you for this beautiful hot sexy piece! Please more! I would LOVE a prequel or perhaps a one shot where the magic fades, draco remembers, then the way harry deals with ir. Hot! At any rate i wish for more!

Date: 2012-06-17 12:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] all-not-well.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed this. :)

There was meant to be a sequel - I started one, at least - but it didn't quite pan out, alas.

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